Morning Glory

This sunrise this morning, framing Mt Rainier (with its shadow cast on the underside of the clouds), made me wish for the eloquence of a poet to describe its glories. Jane Austen had surprisingly little to say about mountains, I discovered, and almost nothing on sunrises. This is the best I could find:

“How much longer do you stay in this heavenly place — till sunrise?” from The Watsons, an unfinished fragment. (see post on finishing fragments)

“Oh, my dear, dear aunt,” [Elizabeth] rapturously cried, “what delight! what felicity! You give me fresh life and vigour. Adieu to disappointment and spleen. What are young men to rocks and mountains? Oh! what hours of transport we shall spend!”  Pride and Prejudice, chapter 27.

I’m no poet, but a song came to me as I stood on the deck, braving the sub-freezing temperatures to watch the day begin. It’s a Christmas song called What Sweeter Music composed by John Rutter. The community choir that I sing in had just performed it as part of our Christmas concert on Sunday, so it was fresh in my mind. It sets to music a poem by Robert Herrick (1591 – 1674):

What sweeter music can we bring than a carol, for to sing the birth of this our heavenly King? Awake the voice! Awake the string!

Dark and dull night, fly hence away. And give the honour to this day that sees December turned to May. That sees December turned to May.

Why does the chilling winter’s morn smile like a field beset with corn? Or smell like a meadow newly shorn, thus on the sudden? Come and see the cause, why things thus fragrant be:

‘Tis he is born, whose quick’ning birth gives life and lustre, public mirth, to heaven and the under-earth.

We see him come and know him ours, who, with his sunshine and his showers, turns the patient ground to flowers. Turns all the patient ground to flowers.

The darling of the world is come. And fit it is we find a room to welcome him. The nobler part of all the house here is the heart, which we will give him; and bequeath this holly and this ivy wreath. To do him honour, who’s our King, and Lord of all this revelling.

What sweeter music can we bring than a carol, for to sing the birth of this, our heavenly King? The birth of this our heavenly King.

The melody is just as beautiful as the words are. (For a listen, follow this link to YouTube. It’s well worth a couple minutes of your time.) Hope your day started with a bit of beauty too, in word, thought or music.

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Christmas Cards

I’ve been creating my own Christmas cards since 2000, each December choosing a different piece of my artwork for the cover image. Two years ago it was a painting of a Venice balcony (painted from the photo you see a portion of above), last year an abstract derived from a glass sculpture, and this year a view of Mt. Rainier (left). Then I print a newsy message on the inside. That’s what I’ve been working on for the past couple of days.
Composing the letter is more than a writing exercise. It’s an invitation to take stock of things, to review the events of the year just concluding, and look forward to what is to come. Any applicable major life events – marriages, deaths, births, graduations, changes of job or residence – figure prominently. But I try to add a few personal details for flavor, and a photo or two. Then I usually close with a reminder of what Christmas means to us (the reason for the season).
There have been moments when I almost regret beginning the tradition, only because it often feels like a lot of extra work at an already-busy time. Still, I’m convinced it’s effort well-spent. I hope our friends enjoy our missives as much as we do the ones we receive. In the long run, though, our own Christmas letters are probably most valuable to us, serving as a permanent record more reliable than my faulty memory. I only wish I had started chronicling our family history sooner.
“Was his letter a long one? Does he give you much account of what he is doing? Is it Christmas gaieties that he is staying for?”  (Mansfield Park, chapter 29)
Update: See related post Oh What a Difference a Decade Makes – another reason I’m glad I took the time to write those Christmas letters!
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NaNoWriMo

 

 

 

Did you know that November was National Novel Writing Month? Many novelists and aspiring novelists take up the challenge, which is to write a complete 50,000 word rough draft in those thirty days (maybe a chapter a day, 7 days a week). I applaud those who attempted it and admire those who actually accomplished it.

 

From what I’ve heard, a lot of advanced planning and preparation is key.  They may have been thinking about the book for months, and have the whole thing plotted out on paper before the month of frantic writing begins. That’s where I would hit my first roadblock: plotting.  I’m no good at it.

Most novelists fall into one of two distinct camps.  There are plotters and there are so-called “pants-ers” (i.e. fly-by-the-seat-of-your-pants).  I fall into the latter group. When I start a novel, I usually have only a vague notion where I’m going, and even less idea how I’m going to get there. I know it sounds like crazy way to embark on a trip, but strangely enough it works out in the end (so far, at least), and the journey is a great adventure.

My other major issue with attempting the NaNoWriMo challenge is the concept of the rough draft – something else I stink at. The theory is that you just pour the story out from beginning to end without worrying about correcting flaws or fine tuning your prose. All that comes later during rewrites. And I see the wisdom in it. Make sure the story works first, then tidy it up.

In practice, however, I do just the opposite. I fret and fuss over every paragraph, every sentence within the paragraph, and every word within each line. I can’t seem to force myself to move on until I’m satisfied with the section I’ve just written. The risk is in wasting hours perfecting a couple pages that might get thrown out later anyway. The upside is that when it’s finally complete, my version of a rough draft is pretty polished.

Now you know why I’ve never attempted (and probably never will) the NaNoWriMo challenge, and why my progress on my current project seems slow. I’m writing the next installment of the Pride and Prejudice saga – the sequel to my sequel The Darcys of Pemberley. I’m currently on chapter six with a word count of 11,600. A completed novel runs in the neighborhood of 100,000 words btw. As you see, I have a ways to go. (Track of my progress on the Return to Longbourn page, and cheer me on.)

In the meantime, though, I will have a couple more things coming. For Myself Alone (another Austen-esque story) will be available in March, and a short story (Mr. Collins’s Last Super) before that. Stay tuned, and happy reading!

Miss Bingley’s attention was quite as much engaged in watching Mr. Darcy’s progress through his book as in reading her own; and she was perpetually either making some inquiry or looking at his page.  (Pride and Prejudice, chapter 11)

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Take Time for Thanksgiving

 

Right after Halloween (and sometimes even before) our retailers would have us begin focusing on Christmas. They want us to start loosening up our wallets now. “No time to lose. Shop early and shop often.” I suppose that’s understandable, especially in light of the poor economic times, when the next month might make or break them, or so we are told.

I love Christmas. But I often think it’s a shame that in our rush to get to it we tend to overlook Thanksgiving, which deserves to be valued for its own sake, not just as a warm-up act for Santa Clause. Of course, not everyone is glossing over Thanksgiving. In fact, I’ve been encouraged to see one friend making daily entries on Facebook about things she’s thankful for – a valuable exercise.  Then tonight I heard a report on the news that thankfulness leads to contentment and happiness.

An interval of meditation, serious and grateful, was the best corrective of everything dangerous in such high-wrought felicity; and she went to her room, and grew steadfast and fearless in the thankfulness of her enjoyment.  (Persuasion, chapter 23)

I’m as guilty as anyone of the bad habit of dwelling on what’s not going right in my world, when the truth is that every day I wake up breathing is a day I should be grateful for. God loves me. My family does too. I have a roof over my head and food in the cupboard. I’m in reasonably good health and I have worthwhile things to occupy my time. What more could I ask for?

Okay, I could ask that my books become wildly successful or that I win the lottery. But should I put off being happy until fame and fortune arrive? That could be a while, and I don’t want to wait. I think I’ll start right now instead. A reader board at a church I pass frequently puts it this way: “GET RICH QUICK! COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS.”

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And the Winner Is…

The results are in! The two winners of last month’s Door Prizes contest can now be revealed. Having been chosen entirely at random, they are (drum roll please):

Lizzy MacGregor

John Pelkey

Congratulations! Please feel free to expound upon your raptures in comment form below, but then contact me via e-mail to claim your prize: shannon@shannonwinslow.com

For those not so fortunate as to win this time, I offer these words of wisdom from Jane Austen:

Upon the whole, therefore, she found, what has sometimes been found before, that an event to which she had been looking with impatient desire did not, in taking place, bring all the satisfaction she had promised herself. It was consequently necessary to name some other period for the commencement of actual felicity – to have some other point on which her wishes and hopes might be fixed, and by again enjoying the pleasure of anticipation, console herself for the present.   (Pride and Prejudice, chapter 42)

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Cup of Tea?


Fellow author/blogger Emily Snyder has asked me to her place for a friendly conversation over a cup of tea. Unfortunately, her place is on the east coast and I live on the west. The next best thing? The virtual tea party, of course … and you’re invited too! I’m headed there now. Please join us at Emily’s cozy little blog spot for a hot cup of Earl Grey. I think she’ll be serving scones with strawberry preserves too. Yum! But don’t worry; virtual scones don’t have any calories. 

They all united; and, on reaching Hartfield gates, Emma, who knew it was exactly the sort of visiting that would be welcome to her father, pressed them all to go in and drink tea with him. The Randalls party agreed to it immediately; and after a pretty long speech from Miss Bates, which few persons listened to, she also found it possible to accept dear Miss Woodhouse’s most obliging invitation.  (Emma, chapter 5)

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Better Than Virtual

For weeks now, ever since The Darcys of Pemberley came out, I’ve been doing “virtual” book tour appearances to spread the word. That’s how things are done these days – online, which is all well and good. In fact it has some distinct advantages. I’m saving a bundle on travel expenses. I’m reaching more people than I ever could in person. Also, I find I’m much more intelligent when I get a chance to edit my words than when I’m speaking off the cuff 😉

Still, there’s nothing like being there. My husband and I just got back from a wonderful trip to Washington DC (and surrounding area), where we spent two weeks exploring the monuments to our country’s past, and the national treasures preserved in museums and archives. Now, we already knew a lot about American history from books. We had viewed images on TV of the people, places, and artifacts involved. Yet we experienced a real thrill upon seeing the actual Liberty Bell and the real Star Spangled Banner. Thomas Jefferson and George Washington came alive for us as we walked in their footsteps – in the halls of government and at their private homes. 

The same thing is true in my experience so far as a writer. Yes, I’m ecstatic to know that electronic versions of my novel are being purchased across the country and around the world by hundreds of people I’ve never met! But it all seems a little unreal. It only begins to sink in when I sign a paper copy and place it into the hands of a real, live reader, or in a face-to-face meeting with someone who has already enjoyed the book (see related post: Making Connections). 

That’s why, when I look back on our vacation, my favorite memories will not be of marble monuments, but of flesh and blood people: the hours spent getting reacquainted with the friend from high school we stayed with; the opportunity to attend (as guest speaker) a Central New Jersey chapter meeting of the Jane Austen Society of North America. I’d already been in contact with these lovely women online (via Facebook and Twitter), but how much better it was to be with them in person! 

“No, indeed,” cried Emma, most happy to begin, “not in the least. I am paricularly glad to see and shake hands with you – and to give you joy in person.” He thanked her with all his heart…  (Emma, chapter 18)

Perhaps, as an increasing amount of our interactions (business and personal) are reduced to electronic chatter in cyberspace, we begin to crave genuine human contact more than before. Am I being too philosophical? Maybe it’s because I’m a hugger (yes, it’s true; you’ve been warned), or I’m just too old to adjust to the new order.

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Historical Perspective

I’ve been on vacation – from practically everything, including my blog (as you may have noticed). A real vacation is a rarity for me, but I’m making the most of this one: two weeks on the east coast, mostly in the Baltimore/DC area, but as far north as central New Jersey and as far south as Williamsburg, Virginia.  

“So much novelty and beauty! I have travelled so little, that every fresh place would be interesting to me… Altogether my impressions of the place are very agreeable.”  (Persuasion)

This is not only new territory for me geographically, but it’s like taking a step back in time as well.  I live in Washington (the other Washington, the state in the northwest) and our history is short. But here, I run into relics of the past everywhere I turn. I’ve seen the original Declaration of Independence (at the National Archives, DC), and the place where it was signed (Independence Hall, Philadelphia, PA). I’ve visited monuments to presidents and to the dead of three wars.  And today, in Baltimore, I entered the house where the original star-spangled banner was created, and Fort McHenry where it flew proudly “in the dawn’s early light.” The experience has been inspiring, educational … priceless. 

What does all this have to do with Jane Austen? More than you might think. Many of the historical events I’m learning about hearken back to her time period – the late 18th and early 19th centuries – and spring from the tangled relationship between her country (England) and that upstart new nation on the other side of the Atlantic. Although Austen rarely brought world events into her novels, she nevertheless wrote against their backdrop – and so do I. The more I know of that time, the better I can imagine what it must have been like for the people who lived then, including the characters in my books. 

Hmm, do you suppose that means I can deduct this whole trip as a business expense? You know, research. Guess I better check with my accountant first.

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Door Prizes

 

As you may know, I’ve been doing guest blog spots here and there to promote my debut novel, The Darcys of Pemberley, giving away several books through those appearances.  I decided it’s high time I do a give-away through my OWN website/blog for my readers and supporters!!!  Wouldn’t you agree?  There will be signed copies of the novel, yes, but since I’ve received so many compliments on the cover art, I’m also looking into making some frame-worthy prints or tee shirts from it!  What do you think of the idea?

Leave me a comment below telling me what noble act you’ve done to qualify (subscribing to this site and/or leaving a review for me at Amazon or Goodreads – you’ll be entered once for each), and what sort of prize you’d like if you’re name is drawn as one of the winners.  Contest closes October 31, and I’ll add more detailed information as it becomes available.  I’ve received so much support from my friends and followers. Now I want to reward your loyalty!

“Perhaps, then, you would bestow it as a reward on that person who wrote the ablest defence of your favourite maxim, that no one can ever be in love more than once in their life.”  (Sense and Sensibility, chapter 17)

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Moving Day

Alas, circumstances change and one must move on, as Mrs. Dashwood discovered. Leaving fond memories behind, she packed up her possessions and three daughters, embarking on a new chapter of her life.

She was impatient to be gone, and indefatigable in her inquiries for a suitable dwelling in the neighbourhood of Norland; for to remove far from that beloved spot was impossible.  (Sense and Sensibility, chapter 3) 

I’ve decided that a move of sorts is in order for me as well, to consolidate my two internet households into one central location.  So, I’ve packed my books and phrases, and moved my blog over to my long-neglected website.  Regular readers should feel right at home there (because it will look pretty much the same as this place).  I’m told, however, that it will require re-subscribing to continue receiving notification of new posts. One click will do it! Well, actually two: one to go there and another to subscribe. Please visit www.shannonwinslow.com now.  I’ve got some fun give-aways planned … in addition to more of the witty and informative posts you’ve come to expect 😉

Wait! Important Update – Plan “A” (described above) didn’t work out so well, so I moved on to Plan “B”, which is that everything is consolidated at this location. Subscribe on this site, and visitors to shannonwinslow.com will automatically be referred here as well. Hope that makes sense, and I’m sorry for any hassle and confusion along the way. Technology: can’t live with it; can’t live without it.

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