December Happenings

I’m in that lull after publishing a book and before really getting started on the next project. Besides, it’s almost Christmas, and let’s face it, no serious work is going to get done before the holidays are over. But that doesn’t mean I have nothing to share with you!

First of all, did you know that in less than a week we’ll be celebrating the 250th anniversary of Jane Austen’s birth? She made her debut at the Steventon rectory on December 16th, 1775, the seventh child born to Rev. George and Mrs. Cassandra Austen in Hampshire, England.

The Austens occupied a position at the lower end of the gentry class. Still, by virtue of her father’s profession and education, and through her brother Edward (who was adopted by rich relatives), Jane was exposed to the richer sorts of people and the higher kind of society that she would later write about in her novels.

Because of her birth and literary legacy, our lives have been greatly enriched! And so all kinds of major celebrations are planned around the world to mark this occasion! I will probably bake a cake in her honor and celebrate quietly by plugging in a DVD of one of my favorite JA adaptations. What about you?


At Austen Variations, were doing an Advent Calendar with lots of games and gifts. Bop over there to get in on all the fun if you want. But I’ll share here what I posted on my day:


Only 2 weeks left until Christmas. Time to get your cards in the mail! Oh. Wait. Most people don’t do that anymore, do they? But I’m not ready to give up the tradition quite yet.  Every year I create my own cards, featuring some of my artwork on the outside and a newsy letter on the inside (see this 2014  post if you’re interested).

Last year, it occurred to me that the cover of my newest book (a short novella entitled It’s a Wonderful Life, Mr. Darcy) could make a great Christmas card with a little modification. Part 1 of today’s Advent Calendar fun is to put together a puzzle to see how the card turned out (follow this link to Jigsaw Explorer). You can modify the number of pieces to make it more or less challenging.

All done? I hope you had fun solving the puzzle, and also that you will consider it my personal Christmas greeting to you, despite the incorrect date.

Part 2: In the spirit of giving, I’ve reduced the Kindle price on It’s a Wonderful Life, Mr. Darcy to $.99 for a limited time! (It’s also available in audio, narrated by Harry Frost, and the paperback makes a nice little gift for the Jane Austen lover in your life.) Find all three formats at Amazon.

Part 3: Whether you read the book or not, I thought you might enjoy this opening scene – Christmas at Pemberley – as told by Darcy himself:


It is Christmas evening – my first of many happy Christmases with Elizabeth, God willing – and we have dear friends gathered at Pemberley to share it with us. Georgiana is here, of course, and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Mr. Bingley and Jane have come, as well as the entire Gardiner family.

I glance at Elizabeth, who sits by my side, her hand tucked in mine. We exchange contented smiles, and I know I am the most fortunate of men.

It has been a full and satisfying day.

We woke to a blanket of white resting an inch or two thick on the ground – enough to delight everybody but not enough to create much inconvenience. So we were still able to safely reach Kympton to attend divine services on this holy day. Afterward, the Gardiner children played on the lawn, throwing snowballs and building what they could with the limited supply of the white stuff. Some of the adults braved the chilly air again as well, joining in the children’s play or just strolling about in the wintery scene, all of us bundled up in our warmest clothing.

Indoors, there have been games and conversation, along with good things to eat morning, noon, and night: hearty but simple fare for the most part, much of it prepared yesterday to lighten the load on the servants today. A few of them volunteered to remain on duty. But most – anybody with family in the area – have gone off for their own Christmas celebrations.

Now I can see through the drawing room windows that the sky is painted with more pink and orange hues than blues. The candles are lit, and the day is coming to a close. As I look about myself, at my comfortable home and the happy faces of my dear ones, I could wish to remain in this present moment forever.

And yet my thoughts refuse to do so. Without warning, the cheerful Christmas scene is now changed for something entirely different. Images from a much darker period suddenly appear, unbidden, before my mind’s eye. Familiar sensations, both frightening and exquisitely painful, clutch at my heart.

I resist the temptation to blink them away at once. Instead, I briefly allow the powerful recollections to wash over me again, as they so often have done since the event took place. It is good to remember, so that I never take Elizabeth and all my other blessings for granted. And so, for just a minute or two, I give myself over to reliving that wonderful, terrible time.

It happened eight months ago, in April, just after Elizabeth refused my first dismal proposal. That was a devastating blow indeed, and it must have in some manner brought on the strange episode that followed. I can conceive of no other explanation. This is the question which still lingers, however; was it real or only some kind of extraordinary dream? One could rightly call it a nightmare except for what I learnt by it. A painful event, once survived, may be counted a treasure if it proves to have been of tremendous value in the end.

The experience to which I refer certainly was – a valuable treasure, I mean. In truth, I count it a great gift, one I shall never forget. Christmas is a time of gift giving, is it not? Perhaps that is why the peculiar episode comes back to my mind again now. But if not a mere dream or even a nightmare, what shall I call it?

It was a visitation.


Now you’re all caught up! I hope all your holiday celebrations are delightful, and that the reason for the season isn’t lost in all the busyness of shopping and going and doing. Now, since I boldly proclaimed that I still plan to send out Christmas cards of my own design, I’d better get to work on them! Do you still send cards? Do you have special plans this year? What are your favorite holiday traditions?

Mr. Darcy sends you all the love in the world that he can spare from me. You are all to come to Pemberley at Christmas. Yours, etc. (Elizabeth, letter to Mrs. Gardiner, Pride and Prejudice, chapter 60)

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Audiobook Giveaway Celebration!

Yay! With the publication of the audiobook of Captain Wentworth in His Own Words, this project is officially finished! (If you’ve missed anything along the way, get caught up by reading all about the book here and in recent posts.)

I’m very pleased with how the audiobook turned out! Nick Cracknell is such a talented voice artist, and he did an amazing job convincingly portraying all the characters (including females and children), bringing them to life. He puts emotion and excitement in where it belongs too, which really enhances the listening experience. Honestly, though, I think I could listen to Nick read the phone book, his voice is so easy on the ears. I invite you to hear what I mean with the audio sample.

I’m pleased to report that early reviews of Captain Wentworth in His Own Words are excellent, averaging 4.8 out of 5 stars on Amazon (5.0 at Goodreads!). A big THANK-YOU to those who’ve taken the time to leave a review to help the book off to a good start! Here’s what one Amazon customer (verified purchaser) had to say:

Shannon Winslow does it again. She brings our imaginations alive with the excitement and details never before seen while always maintaining the standard we’d expect from a Jane Austen book.

Persuasion is my favorite story and the way Shannon has captured the gallant Captain Wentworth through his trials as a child to the hardships and adventures of becoming himself has added a depth to his character that makes him more human than ever before. It shows his struggles against family values and unrequited love it makes him more human and easier for us readers to connect with him on a human and personal level.

Congratulations and thank you, Shannon on another amazing book it will definitely be a favorite for years to come!

Now that the project is complete and the work of the past year has paid off, I thought I’d celebrate by giving away some lovely audiobooks! Interested?

To be entered in the random drawing, just leave a comment below saying why you want to listen to Captain Wentworth in His Own Words. If you have already read it in another format, say why you’d like a reread in audio. (If you’ve already purchased this audiobook, another will be substituted.) And don’t worry; you don’t have to have an Audible account to redeem your book, just have access to Audible US or Audible UK. Please state in your comment to which marketplace you belong!

The contest will close on November 15th, and winners will receive their free audio codes by email. Good luck!

Captain Wentworth… had been lucky in his profession… He had always been lucky; he knew he should be so still. Such confidence, powerful in its own warmth, and bewitching in the wit which often expressed it, must have been enough for Anne… (Persuasion, chapter 4)

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Mr. Collins Interviews Shannon Winslow

I’ll explain about this post in a minute, but first an UPDATE on CAPTAIN WENTWORTH IN HIS OWN WORDS. The book is now available (here) in paperback and Kindle, with the audio version coming within a week or two! My sincere thanks to those of you who have already purchased and read it! – and ESPECIALLY TO THOSE WHO HAVE LEFT A REVIEW at Amazon and/or Goodreads. That’s about the nicest thing you can do for any author you enjoy!

I’ve been on a limited blog tour with the book since it published (see previous post), and I originally intended this fun little piece for one of those stops. But then I decided to share it here instead! You see, it has become a tradition that, with the publication of each new book, I sit down for an interview with Mr. Collins (now Sir William Collins). Did you know that, after his run as a legendary literary figure, he turned his talents to a new career as a talk show host? It’s true!

I’m sorry to say, though, that he and I have not always been on the best of terms. The awkwardness stems from the fact that I made his character’s early demise my top priority as a writer. In fact, Mr. Collins expired in the very first chapter of my very first novel (The Darcys of Pemberley). I’m afraid he’s never quite forgiven me for that. Here’s our most recent interview:


[House lights dim. Applause sign flashes. Stage lights come up to reveal a platform with twin retro club chairs occupied by host Sir William Collins and today’s guest, the modestly successful and impeccably dressed author Shannon Winslow. Collins lifts a hand in the style of a royal wave to acknowledge the audience before turning his glowering attention to his guest.]

Collins:  Ms. Winslow, you’re back.

Winslow:  As you see.

Collins:  Then I suppose I am obliged to welcome you once again to Meet the Author.

Winslow:  Thank you, but I must say you don’t seem very happy about it.

Collins:  How perceptive you are, Ms. Winslow. It’s this book of yours. [holds up copy of Captain Wentworth in His Own Words]

Winslow:  Is there something the matter with it? [takes and examines the book] It looks perfectly all right to me.

Collin:  It’s only the title I take exception to… Oh, and the cover picture… And I presume the contents as well, although I haven’t read it.

Winslow:  You don’t approve? Oh, wait. Now I see what has distressed you. You were hoping for a different character to be featured: Mr. Collins in His Own Words. Is that it?

Collins:  I knew you would come to the right conclusion, given enough time.

Winslow:  Pardon me, Sir William, but I’m sure I mentioned to you the last time I was here that this novel was underway. I had to finish it before considering anything else. Besides, I already have several Pride and Prejudice novels, and I was eager to do something else from Persuasion – my second favorite Austen. It’s hard for me to believe, but it’s been more than ten years since my only other Persuasion story was published: The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen. Do you remember?

Collins: [waves his hand dismissively] I see so many authors, so many books.

Winslow:  Of course. I understand. I am still quite proud of that one, though. Some of my best work, I believe, although it’s a little like saying you have a favorite child, I suppose. They’re all special to me in different ways.

Collins:  So what’s “special” about this latest book, then?

Winslow:  Well, anybody who’s read one of my other …in His Own Words novels (Fitzwilliam Darcy, Colonel Brandon, or Mr. Knightley) will be familiar with the basic concept. I take an Austen hero and expand on his story– retelling the original story from his point of view, yes, but adding so much more. In fact, this book (same as the others) is at least fifty percent brand new prequel material. I dig into the character’s past, where he comes from and what he’s experienced – things that shape the man he’s become and how he behaves later on.

In Captain Wentworth’s case that’s a major departure from the others, because he’s not born to the landed gentry class. He starts pretty low on the ladder and has to make something of himself by his own effort and genius.

Collins:  You sound as if you admire him, Ms. Winslow.

Winslow:  Oh, I do, Sir William! At least the man he becomes. He’s very flawed and damaged in the beginning, due to things in his past, but he completely redeems himself in the end. I think it’s how far he’s had to come and the size of the obstacles he’s surmounted along the way (including his pride) that makes it such a satisfying story. Then there’s the adventure and romance of his life at sea to savor!

Collins:  In that case, Ms. Winslow, you might be interested to know that I too have had to surmount several very formidable obstacles in order to rise to the towering success and universal admiration I’ve achieved. Not the least of those obstacles, I would remind you, was the premature termination of my run as a beloved literary figure!

Winslow:  Still can’t let that go, can you?

Collins:  Great men learn to rise above adversity and injustice, but one never forgets.

Winslow:  I see. [awkward pause] Well, I suppose it couldn’t hurt to at least discuss the possibilities of a Mr. Collins novel – delve a little into your past misfortunes, how you overcame them, and so forth.

Collins:  [nods head in a bow] Thank you. That is excellent news. Then it may be as well to be silent about past grievances. Only let me assure you, my dear Ms. Winslow, that I can from my heart most cordially wish you felicity and success with this new novel. I hope Captain Wentworth in His Own Words will be celebrated as a great triumph. Although, I flatter myself in thinking that, with our future collaboration, the best is yet to come!

Winslow:  [says doubtfully] I suppose anything is possible, Sir William, but remember. I have only promised to discuss the possibility…

Collins:  [rises to his feet and interrupts Ms. Winslow to address the audience with much bravado] Ladies and gentlemen, you heard it here first! Mr. Collins will finally be given his due in a forthcoming Shannon Winslow novel!

[applause sign flashes and the audience responds with loud cheering]

Winslow: No, Sir William! You misunderstood me. I never promised… [but her words are completely drowned out]

[While Sir William continues to bask in the adulation of his fans, Ms. Winslow is escorted back to her dressing room by an assistant, who observes her shaking her head in bewilderment and muttering, “What have I done? What have I done?”]


I hope you enjoyed this interview! I wrote the last part as a joke, obviously, but it did get me thinking about the possibility. Mr. Collins in His Own Words? It would be a very different kind of a book since Mr. Collins is a very different kind of “hero.” But it might be fun! What do you think?


Mr. Collins was eloquent in her praise. The subject elevated him to more than usual solemnity of manner, and with a most important aspect he protested that he had never in his life witnessed such behaviour in a person of rank – such affability and condescension as he himself had himself experienced from [Shannon Winslow] – Pride and Prejudice, chapter 14

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Pre-Release Post – Captain Wentworth in His Own Words

Less than a week to go until the official launch of Captain Wentworth in His Own Words!

Publishing a book is a little like taking a major trip. It’s equally exciting, for one thing. Also, there’s a LOT of preparation required. Only instead of researching and planning your itinerary, making reservations, and packing your bags, there’s writing/editing 90,000 words, formatting and uploading files, and setting up dates for a promotional blog tour.

For the reader, it’s a little easier. Just decide on a literary destination and go!

Think of this showy graphic I created as one of those big, glossy travel posters that get you hooked on taking the trip in the first place. It gives you a vision of what you’ll see and sparks your imagination for all the adventures you’ll experience if you sign up for the trip!

Or maybe you’re influenced more by word-of-mouth recommendations. I just received this endorsement for the book today from one of my advance readers: “Read the first 5 chapters so far and I’m sooo sucked in!!! I’m loving his childhood story so far!!!”

So I hope you are onboard, ready to come along on Captain Wentworth’s adventures starting September 18th.

Now that everything is pretty well set, and I’m just counting down the days, I wanted to be sure you’re up to speed with the full itinerary.

In case you missed it, I held the “strip-tease” cover reveal at Austen Variations last week. You can pop over there to read it if you’re interested. But I always save the first look at the full paperback cover for here, for my own loyal subscribers. So, without further ado, here it is!

This will wrap around 300 pages covering everything from Wentworth’s childhood, his days in the Navy, meeting Anne the first time, their falling in love and painful breakup, as well as the events of the original novel told from his point of view. As you can probably guess, there WILL be a happy ending to the story!

After the official release post at Austen Variations on the 18th, the travelling continues – around the US, Italy, and Portugal – on a 6-stop blog tour, listed below. I will add live links as available so you can follow along. There will be never-before-seen excerpts, interviews, and other good things!

So check back here for updates. The paperback and Kindle copy go live at Amazon on Thursday, September 18th! (You can preorder your Kindle copy now to avoid delay.) And for you audiophiles, I’m happy to say that and the audiobook is already in production. Thanks for reading and sharing this journey with me!

“So much novelty and beauty! I have travelled so little that every fresh place would be interesting to me. But there is real beauty at Lyme, and in short” (with a faint blush at some recollections) altogether my impressions of the place are very agreeable.” -Persuasion, chapter 20

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Captain Wentworth in His Own Words: Cover Art Reveal!

The new cover isn’t quite ready, but I couldn’t resist giving my faithful readers a special preview in the meantime! So, today I’m revealing the artwork that will grace the front cover as well as the steps in the cover design process along the way. (UPDATE: continue on and you will now find the finished cover at the bottom!)

First, since this book is part of a series, the cover will follow the basic format of the others: Fitzwilliam Darcy… Colonel Brandon… and Mr. Knightley in His Own Words. (See right sidebar, if you aren’t familiar with them.) So it will feature a portrait of the title character (an artist’s interpretation of one of his film adaptation incarnations). Then the title band goes above it, with the hero’s name in large, standard font and the rest in script. The author name band goes at the bottom.

There’s a second, smaller image above the title band also. For the other three books, that second image is a house associated with the story. But that wouldn’t do for Captain Wentworth, because he’s not a house-bound sort of guy. So I decided, and I hope you’ll agree, that it had to be a ship (a frigate, like the Laconia, as in this painting) taking that top spot.

The portrait will obviously be the most prominent part of the cover design, though, and it’s based on Ciaran Hinds’ portrayal of Captain Wentworth. I know that won’t please everybody, but it is in line with the overwhelming preference of readers that I polled (see this post for official results).

But even with the subject decided, it was difficult to find the perfect image to base the portrait on. So in the end, I chose two – one for the face…

…and the other for the uniform…

Meld them together, and what have you got? Something like this:

Not a perfect likeness, I know (perhaps a plus for you non-CH fans!), but then neither is Captain Wentworth perfect! He’s a bold but flawed hero, as his story will reveal.

So now that I’ve given you all the elements of the cover design, just close your eyes and put them together in your mind! Can you picture it? If not, stick around for more info soon: finished cover reveal, publication dates (mid-late September), etc. Follow my Facebook author page or check back here for updates. In the meantime, you can read more about the book, including the Prologue, here.

UPDATE! Here’s the finished cover! Read the official cover reveal post here. The launch date for the paperback and Kindle versions of the book is set for September 18th, with audio following within a couple of weeks afterwards. Preorder your Kindle copy here.

I hope you’re excited to read Captain Wentworth’s story in his own words.- to learn how he wound up in the Navy at a young age; how he met and fell in love with Anne the first time; and why he flew off in such an unreasonable rage when she tried to put their engagement on hold. And what about his bad behavior when they met again – flirting with the Musgrove girls right in front of Anne? Inquiring minds want to know why!

I think you’ll agree that Captain Wentworth has a lot of explaining to do. Right? So it’s high time he got started!

“I mean to offer some kind of explanation, some kind of apology, for the past; to open my whole heart to you, and by convincing you, that though I have been always a blockhead, I have not been always a rascal, to obtain something like forgiveness…” (Sense and Sensibility, chapter 44)

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Austen Men

I had hoped to have a cover reveal for you by now, but these things always take longer than one thinks they will. (Projected publication date for Captain Wentworth in His Own Words is now September.) So I’m going a different direction today, contemplating some of the important men in my life!

First, to keep me out of trouble, I’d better acknowledge my darling husband and my two grown sons. I love them dearly, but unfortunately I can’t reasonably describe any of the three as an “Austen Man,” in the sense of loving Austen. They are supportive and pleased with my modest success as a writer of Austen fiction, but I’m sure they cannot begin to understand the appeal. (selfie of the whole gang a few years ago – husband, sons, self, daughters-in-law, and 3 of our now 4 grandkids).

Next, I’d like to give a shoutout to a fine list of men who were created by the mind of Austen herself: Mr. Darcy, Mr. Knightley, Colonel Brandon, Henry Tilney, and all the rest. Since my personal favorite Austen hero tends to be the one with whom I’ve been spending the most time, that would be Captain Wentworth at the moment. As I’ve been writing Captain Wentworth in His Own Words, I’ve come to understand that he is a very flawed hero (and why). But he redeems himself with possibly the most satisfying character arc of any of them, growing and becoming enlightened over the course of the book! So it’s been a real pleasure to spend the past year getting to know him better!

Captain Frederick Wentworth… was at that time a remarkably fine young man, with a great deal of intelligence, spirit, and brilliancy... (Persuasion, chapter 4)

As for real-life guys who understand and appreciate Jane Austen, they are a small but excellent set of men! Maybe some of you are even lucky enough to have married one. As you now know, I did not. But I have been lucky enough to meet a few. And there are two such paragons that I have spent quite a bit of time with recently, earning them both a mention here.

Collins Hemingway is one such man. This is a really smart guy with multiple degrees, including a master’s in English Literature, and several published works – both fiction and non-fiction. I first met him in 2016, when he was in the midst of writing/publishing his trilogy: The Marriage of Miss Jane Austen. (Read my two interviews with him here and here.) Lately, though, I’ve been spending time with him in the sense of reading his more recently published non-fiction book: Jane Austen and the Creation of Modern Fiction: Six Novels in “a Style Entirely New.”

Jane Austen’s creative process has been largely unexamined. This book explores her development as a writer: what she adapted from tradition for her needs; what she learned novel to novel; how she used that learning in future works; and how her ultimate mastery of fiction changed the course of English literature. Jane Austen overcame the limitations of early fiction by pivoting from superficial adventures to the psychological studies that have defined the novel since… This evaluation of Austen’s creative process brings into focus the strengths and weaknesses of her six novels. Each is examined in its use of major fictional techniques… The result is a revealing analysis of how world-class fiction is built from the ground up.

I usually struggle trying to read scholarly works (which this serious criticism definitely is), but I found this one surprisingly accessible. I certainly learned a lot about Austen’s work, her process, and her progress through her writing career. Although I have loved her novels for years (so much so that they inspired my second career as an author), my appreciation for them and for Austen herself only increased by understanding more about the trails she blazed, her ingenious writing innovations, and the different distinctions of each novel. So thank you, Collins, for opening my eyes and expanding my horizons!

Last, but certainly not least, I want to acknowledge Jack Caldwell as a true Austen man as well as an Austenesque author. His many JAFF titles include Mr. Darcy Came to Dinner and his Jane Austen Fighting Men series. I have worked with Jack for a long time over at the Austen Variations blog (where he is the sole male author of the group, btw). But during the last year, I’ve spent quite a bit of time haunting his email in-box. That’s because he very generously consented to serve as my unofficial technical advisor for all the Regency era sailing bits in Captain Wentworth in His Own Words.

Readers told me they wanted to hear about Wentworth’s adventures at sea. The problems was that even after a fair amount of research, I was still woefully unequipped to write knowledgeably and convincingly about that aspect of his past, which could not reasonably be omitted. That’s when Jack, who is very well versed on the subject himself, came to my rescue. He patiently answered my many questions, offered to read the finished manuscript for accuracy, and even granting me permission to adapt two of his own short stories to include in the book!

In short, he went above and beyond the call of duty, and I truly don’t know what I would have done without his help and contributions to the project. THANK YOU, JACK!

Aren’t Austen men wonderful? Do you know one personally? Have you had the good fortune to marry one? Or perhaps, by your influence, you’ve turned your non-Austen-appreciator husband/son/friend into a real Austen man. Share your story!

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And the Survey Says…

Captain Wentworth in His Own Words is nearing the finish line, and I’m thinking about the cover design. So, as you may know, I conducted a survey recently, in a post over at Austen Variation, where I asked which of a collection of images should serve as the inspiration for the cover art.

I really appreciate everyone who participated! The voting was spirited and the results a little surprising – to me, at least. Before we get to them, though, let me catch the rest of you up a bit.

Using “Captain Wentworth Persuasion” as my search terms, I collected the best of what popped up. They aren’t all precisely on target but, using the artist’s license, any one of them could be sufficiently transformed to serve the purpose. This is only for inspiration, after all.

So in addition to the official Wentworths – Ciaran Hinds (#5 and 6), Rupert Penry-Jones (#1 and 8), and Cosmo Jarvis (#7) – I added a few Horatio Hornblower images – Ioan Gruffudd (#2 and 9) and from 1951, Gregory Peck (#4). Finally, I threw Poldark into the mix (#3 – Aidan Turner) for good measure!

The hard part is deciding between these lovely options! Which is why I asked for help, as I have before. (See these earlier posts: The Mr. Knightley PageantColonel Brandon cover prototypes .)

Around 60 people responded to the Captain Wentworth poll, most voting for the actor they preferred (I frequently heard, “He’s my Captain Wentworth,” in the comments) rather than for the specific pose. Several mentioned that they felt, regardless which image is ultimately selected as the inspiration photo, showing some evidence of a naval uniform was very important. I totally agree (and it would be no trouble to add it where necessary). Captain Wentworth is more at home on a ship than in a drawing room, after all!

Now, without further ado, here are the poll results:

  • 1st place: Ciaran Hinds
  • 2nd place: Rupert Penry-Jones
  • 3rd place: Gregory Peck
  • 4th place: Ioan Gruffudd
  • 5th place: Aidan Turner
  • 6th place: Cosmo Jarvis

Are you surprised? I expected a tight race between CH and RPJ for first and second, and I had no idea which would come out on top. The surprise was how lopsided the vote turned out, CH receiving almost twice as many votes as his rival. I was also impressed with GP’s relatively strong showing. People thought IG was too recognizable as Horatio Hornblower and too baby-faced. And CJ, sadly, had virtually no support at all.

What does it all mean? As is always the case, the cover probably won’t make everybody happy. Some people will get their favorite and some will not. But it seems I do have a pretty clear mandate from the people this time, which should make my final decision a little less agonizing.

Do you have any further thoughts on the images or the cover design? It’s not too late to add your input!

I expect to have Captain Wentworth in His Own Words out late this summer, probably August. Watch for the cover reveal and other exciting announcements! (If you’ve missed earlier posts, see the book page, and excerpt 1, excerpt 2)


Captain Frederick Wentworth… was at that time a remarkably fine young man, with a great deal of intelligence, spirit, and brilliancy; and Anne an extremely pretty girl, with gentleness, modesty, taste, and feeling. Half the sum of attraction on either side might have been enough, for he had nothing to do, and she had hardly anybody to love…

Persuasion, chapter 4

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Bride and Prejudice: a Movie Review

I’m sure you’ve been there too. You’re in the mood for a movie and naturally craving another hit of Pride and Prejudice. The problem is you’ve watched the classic film adaptations so recently that repeating one of them again this soon just doesn’t quite appeal. Perhaps, then, something that retains the flavor of the original story but is presented in an entirely different style. Yes, that would be just the thing!

I was in that situation the other night, so I pulled the 2004 movie Bride and Prejudice out of my DVD collection. Since I hadn’t watched it in a long time, I knew it would feel fresh and new to me. And it definitely did.

In this Bollywood style retelling, the P&P story has been transplanted to modern-day India (with stop offs in London and LA), where a beautiful, feisty Indian young woman, Lalita Bakshi (Aishwarya Rai), falls into a love/hate relationship with handsome American hotel mogul William Darcy (Martin Henderson). As with the original Darcy and Elizabeth, their mutual attraction keeps running up against thorny roadblocks – in this case, primarily his perceived Western arrogance clashing against her defensiveness about her country, culture, and family. And as with the original, there’s fault and misunderstanding on both sides.

P&P translates well into this new setting, where at least some of the same social dynamics still exist: class distinctions, pressure to arrange advantageous matches for single daughters. You will easily recognize the counterparts for the characters we know and love so well, too, most of them appropriately portrayed,. And it’s always good sport to discover lines and plot points from Austen’s original story strewn here and there along the way.

Beyond the story itself, though, Bride and Prejudice provides a feast for eyes and ears: – riotous color, scenery from three continents, with lots of Indian-flavored music and dance – all of which makes for a very entertaining 2 hours.

This film doesn’t take itself too seriously (which, in case you hadn’t figured it out by then, you know for sure when a robed gospel choir shows up at a rave beach party to serenade D&L). As long as you don’t try to take it too seriously either, I think you will enjoy watching it at least once. It will never be your go-to movie for the authentic P&P experience, but it’s a great choice when you’re in the mood to change things up a little. In that respect, it’s like watching Pride and Prejudice 1940 with Greer Garson and Laurence Olivier – a fun romp rather than a faithful interpretation of the classic novel.

4 stars


Have you seen this film? What did you think of it? Did you enjoy the color, song, and dance aspects? Will you watch it again?

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“Nothing could be so gratifying to me as to hear your opinion of it,” was his answer; “but I fear there would be some disappointment; you would not find it equal to your present ideas…” (Mansfield Park, chapter 6)

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Popular Highlights: The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen

Confession. I just finished re-reading one of my own books… again: The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen. It is arguably my favorite, or at least the one of which I’m most proud, so it holds a special place in my heart. And it’s dedicated to.

“.. every fan who has wished Jane Austen herself might have enjoyed the romance and happy ending she so carefully crafted for all her heroines. I have endeavored to grant you wish.”

So it’s dedicated to me and to you too! And one really ought to read a book that has been dedicated to one. Right?

My books are like old friends, whom I start to miss if it goes too long between visits. Besides, I’ve got Persuasion on my mind since I’m working on Captain Wentworth in His Own Words. So I think I can legitimately call this research… or inspiration… or at least keeping my head in the right game!

Since I was reading on my Kindle, I periodically came across an underlined “popular highlight.” Are you familiar with this feature? It shows which lines in a book have been highlighted most by other readers. It’s not designed primarily for the author’s amusement, but I enjoy it. It’s so interesting (and gratifying) to see which things I’ve written have been marked, indicating that people especially loved or valued them.

So today, I’m going to share the most frequently highlighted lines from The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen. Will there be a memorable line or a bit of wisdom to be found? Let’s see!



To begin is to risk everything – crushing defeat, utter failure or, worse still, mediocrity. However, not taking the risk is unthinkable.

It is a humbling thing to find oneself utterly helpless, and yet it can be a gift as well. One who is too proud to admit a weakness will never experience the compassionate care of others. It is only when that person is brought low, dropped to the bottom of a deep pit, that he or she will look up for relief and find it.

Though I should be sorry to leave the pleasures of this world, I will not be sorry to leave behind its pain and heartaches. I will go when He calls me, confident that the best is yet to come, that the blessings of heaven will far outshine what I leave behind.

“Sensible girls stop believing in fairy stories when they grow up, else how are they to marry ordinary men and be happy?” (Mrs. Austen)

“Sadly, though, what one wants and what is best are not always the same thing. In fact, they are very often quite different indeed.” (Madam Lefroy)

People do not always choose wisely for themselves when it comes to love. Or if wisely, perhaps not fortunately. One’s affection must be returned. I understand something about the matter.

All the privilege I claim for my own sex is that of loving longest when all hope is gone.

Because of it, I know I was once well and truly loved by a man of superior worth. That can never be taken from me.

Denying one’s own frailty is a form of pride, one that I can no longer afford to maintain.

[He] had been less interested in cultivating a new literary garden in her fallow mind than in reaping the already well-grown harvest in mine.



As other readers did, I’m sure you noticed the Jane Austen quote from Persuasion, one of many I included in the book. Actually, since this book is written in first person from Jane Austen’s point of view, ALL of these (except the two credited to others) can be considered her words. Those of us who choose to believe this book represents what really happened certainly will!

Do you have a favorite among them? If you’ve read the book, do you remember any of these? (And if you haven’t, why not???) I think my personal favorite is the last one. I love incorporating gardening images into my writing!

Learn more about The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen here. Purchase it here.

[If you’re interested in Popular Highlights from my other novels, check out these other posts: Popular Highlights: Romance, Popular Highlights: Wisdom, and Popular Highlights: “Return”

PROGRESS UPDATE on Captain Wentworth in His Own Words: I now have 260 pages and 80,000 words! I figure 3 or 4 more chapters ought to do it, so I’m getting close to the finish line. Still too early to predict a publication date though, so stay tuned! (Read preview excerpts here and here.)

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Captain Wentworth in His Own Words: Preview Excerpt #2

Last month I was encouraged to tell you what great progress I had been making on Captain Wentworth in His Own Words! And I’m still making progress, just not as rapidly.

Unfortunately, I had to take a break to do my taxes. Ugh. I thought I was done with that nasty, time-consuming chore at last, but then yesterday I got an email from the accountant listing all the items I’d missed or questions that remain – all 13 of them! Can any of you relate?

So I guess I have a little more work to do there before I can get back to the book in earnest. But I’m always thinking about it and planning what comes next, even when I’m not able to actually sit down and write.

As most of you already know, this book, like the others in my “In His Own Words” series (Fitzwilliam Darcy..., Colonel Brandon…, Mr. Knightley...) is written in first person from the hero’s point of view, covering the time period of Jane Austen’s novel and SO MUCH MORE! That means this book will retell the story of Persuasion from Captain Wentworth’s point of view, adding the pivotal events of his childhood that shaped his character, how he came to be in the navy in the first place, his adventures at sea, and his original romance with Anne Elliot, followed by their violent breakup – in other words, well over 50% completely new material! I hope you are eager to read it all!

While you’re waiting, though, I do at least have an excerpt for you today!

The first excerpt I shared (here) was when Wentworth received a letter from his sister telling him that she and Admiral Croft had signed a lease on Kellynch Hall. This one follows not long afterward (so you might want to go back and read that one first if you missed it). Now he has arrived at Kellynch himself and is anticipating the unavoidable reunion with Anne. And remember, the story is told in Captain Wentworth’s own words.



Miss Anne Elliot was at Uppercross. That is what my sister had said. Then it seemed my former love was unmarried still. And so nearby, too. I did not at first know whether I should be pleased at the information or not. In any case, a reunion between us could not now reasonably be avoided. Not that it mattered to me. I was perfectly indifferent to the idea of seeing her again, other than a certain amount of natural curiosity. But it was no more than that, I told myself: mere curiosity.

The ticklish business would be in how to manage it – what level of familiarity to acknowledge between Anne and myself. A slight prior acquaintance, as I had already admitted to, seemed safest. It was important that she and I should be in unison about this point. It would not do for one to claim a strong connection whilst the other had already denied any acquaintance at all. Since there would be no opportunity to discuss the matter with Anne in advance, I would just have to trust to luck and hope that her people were as little familiar with the truth of our unhappy history as I knew mine to be.

It would not be long before I found out, it seemed, for the old squire – the senior Mr. Musgrove – rode over to Kellynch with a formal invitation only a few days later, an invitation for the three of us to dine at the great house at Uppercross, with those residing at the cottage promised to be present as well. Since my brother and sister were not free any sooner, a date in one week’s time was settled upon.

“You must have made a very good impression when you met these Musgroves,” I suggested to my sister when the squire had gone on his way again. “To be invited to dine after so brief an acquaintance is a particular attention indeed.”

“It may be nothing out of the ordinary for the Musgroves, for I gather that they are very much in the habit of giving dinners. Now that you have met Mr. Musgrove yourself, Frederick, you have a sample of what a good sort of people they are: friendly and hospitable with no stuffy pretentions to elegance, all of which suits us very well.” She paused before continuing with a look of mischief in her eye. “And I believe our being discovered able to produce a rich, unattached younger brother was very much in our favor as well.”

I looked at her in some confusion.

“Did I not mention that the Musgroves have two daughters of marriageable age to get off their hands?” Sophy continued. “Louisa and Henrietta. Both are rather pretty, I might add. Spirited as well. I daresay their father would be terribly pleased if one of them were to catch your fancy.”

“Now Sophy, I would wager that it is you yourself who is the true matchmaker in the case. But I am in no hurry to marry. Remember that, if you please.”

“No man ever admits he desires to be married until he meets the girl who captures his heart. Then heaven and earth cannot stand in his way! It will be the same for you, my dear brother. Mark my words. And who knows but what either Louisa or Henrietta Musgrove might be just the one to do it?”

She was not far wrong, although I hesitated to admit it. With my fortune made and being turned on shore for the foreseeable future, I was not opposed to the idea of falling in love again and settling down. I had not resigned myself to being beached forever, though. No, the wife I chose would have to be a lady willing to go to sea with me whenever I should be given a new command, as my sister had done for the admiral.

“You have found me out,” I said jestingly. “Here I am, quite ready to make a foolish match. Anybody between fifteen and thirty may have me for the asking. A little beauty and a few smiles, a few compliments to the navy, and I am a lost man. Should not this be enough to satisfy a humble sailor, who has had no society among women to make him too particular?”

She laughed. “Humble sailor, indeed! But I can see that I shall have to set myself your guard in the matter, Frederick. You could do worse than a Miss Musgrove, as probably you might without my help. But do be serious and tell me the woman you want, so that I may look out for her.”

“Very well, Sophia,” I said slowly, deciding what to tell her, for I would by no means say what had immediately sprung to mind: Give me a woman very like Anne Elliot, that is the Anne Elliot I thought I knew before she broke her promise to me. Instead I said glibly, “Let her have a strong mind and sweetness of manner. That is all I ask. Something a little inferior I shall of course put up with, if necessary, but it must not be much. There you have it, my dear sister. If I am a fool, I shall be a fool indeed, for I believe I have thought on the subject more than most men.”

“Fie, Frederick! This will never do. You say you are not particular, but I know you better. There can be nothing at all ‘inferior’ about the woman you choose, or you will prefer to remain single!”

My sister was right, of course, though I would not own it to her. There was a great deal more that I comprehended in the picture of my future bride. To sweetness and strength of mind must be added attractiveness of person, gentleness of manner, modesty, taste, and feeling. And firmness of character. What good was all the rest without that? How could one depend on a lady if “yes” could become “no” by the persuasion of others? Perhaps such a paragon as I envisioned did not exist. Still, that is what I wanted; I could not seem to help it.

However, if one of the Miss Musgroves turned out to be anything close to that ideal, I thought I might just fall in love with her in spite of myself. Otherwise, a harmless flirtation would be very pleasant too. I certainly would not decline an opportunity to enjoy the friendship of two pretty, amiable young ladies, for I had been much deprived of female companionship in my long years at sea.

As I pictured the scenes that might play out at Uppercross, those persons who would be present and how I might behave, I smiled to myself. If such a playful flirtation or a falling in love should happen to take place within the sight of the woman who had once refused to marry me… If my pleasing attentions should be accepted, perhaps even returned, in front of the lady who had rejected me… Well, so much the better.

Although I did not admit to such a motive at the time, it was a taste of sweet revenge I was after. That much was due to me, or so said my wounded pride. If I had the chance, I meant that Anne should feel my pointed disregard. Even if she no longer cared for me at all, I could at least see that she experienced the sting of be slighted, the pain of being examined and found wanting. Just as I was due some retribution, she was due some repayment in kind.

It was a cruel plan that began forming in my head that day, cruel and perilous as well. But it would be weeks before I recognized the danger. By then, regrettably, the damage would already be done.



I hope you enjoyed this excerpt and that you’ll stayed tuned for further news about Captain Wentworth in His Own Words. Wish me luck on finishing up my taxes and on finding lots and lots of uninterrupted writing time!

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