The Power of a Well-Written Letter

I know I promised to write about my experiences at the JASNA AGM in Minneapolis, and I will! But it the meantime, here’s my most recent post at Austen Authors, reproduced here in its entirety:

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“Let us never underestimate the power of a well-written letter.”

Okay, so this line isn’t strictly a Jane Austen quote… but it certainly could have been. She must have subscribed to this policy (as I do) because she often allowed her characters to explain themselves and express their innermost feelings in letter form. Case in point: the 8-pager Mr. Darcy wrote to Elizabeth after his failed proposal in the middle of Pride and Prejudice:

darcy-hands-elizabeth-the-letterBe not alarmed, Madam, on receiving this letter, by the apprehension of its containing any repetition of those sentiments, or renewal of those offers, which were last night so disgusting to you. I write without any intention of paining you, or humbling myself, by dwelling on wishes, which, for the happiness of both cannot be too soon forgotten… You must pardon the freedom with which I demand your attention; your feelings, I know, will bestow it unwillingly, but I demand it of your justice…

The letter, over which Elizabeth obsessed for days, represented the turning point in their relationship. Elizabeth’s eyes were opened and she began to see Darcy and his behavior in a new light because of it. And Austen included several other letters in the novel – at least three from Mr. Collins, Lydia’s note about her elopement, and the one to Elizabeth from Mrs. Gardiner (excerpted below) immediately spring to mind.

Will you be very angry with me, my dear Lizzy, if I take this opportunity of saying how much I like him. His behaviour to us has, in every respect, been as pleasing as when we were in Derbyshire… He wants nothing but a little more liveliness, and that, if he marry prudently, his wife may teach him. I thought him very sly; he hardly ever mentioned your name. But slyness seems the fashion. Pray forgive me, if I have been very presuming, or at least do not punish me so far as to exclude me from P. I shall never be quite happy till I have been all round the park. A low phaeton with a nice little pair of ponies would be the very thing…

Perhaps the inclusion of so many letters in Austen’s books is a holdover from the epistle prose that had been popular before the advent of the true novel. In one of her lesser-known works, Lady Susan, Austen used this format herself, telling the story entirely through letters exchanged by a handful of interrelated people. And did you know that the earliest drafts of Pride and Prejudice and Sense and Sensibility were also written in this style?

The line at the top of the page is actually taken from the movie The Jane Austen Book Club and is said in reference to arguably the most compelling letter composed by one of her characters: the culminating note left by Captain Wentworth for Anne Elliot near the end of Persuasion. Although they had fallen in love when they first met, Anne had been forcefully “persuaded” by her family to reject the captain’s proposal. Now, years later, they have a second chance. The letter seals the deal:

Captain Wentworth…You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope. Tell me not that I am too late, that such precious feelings are gone for ever. I offer myself to you again with a heart even more your own than when you almost broke it eight years and a half ago. Dare not say that man forgets sooner than woman, that his love has an earlier death. I have loved none but you. Unjust I may have been; weak and resentful I have been, but never inconstant…

Did I hear a collective sigh, ladies? Was there ever a more poignant plea for the ultimate consummation of long-thwarted love? I think not. (I’m excited that I get to use a variation of this letter in the novel I’m currently working on: The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen. It’s a Persuasion tie-in, starring Jane Austen herself!)

Letter writing is a lost art, I’m afraid. But people used to take a lot of care and pride in it. Jane Austen certainly did so in her personal correspondence, making sure that what she wrote entertained as well as informed the recipient. For instance, she once wrote an entire letter backwards (every word spelled back to front, instead of front to back), just to amuse her niece Cassy. Cassandra Austen ultimately destroyed a large portion of Jane’s letters. But many were preserved and give us more insight to her movements, her thoughts, and her sharp wit. Be sure to read them if you haven’t already.

In person and in real time, I rarely think of just the right retort or response to someone. But in a letter, I can take as much time as I need to be sure I say exactly what I want, exactly the way I want to say it – a big advantage over a phone call, casual email, or instant message! I especially enjoyed writing the many letters in my novels, trying to make each one a little work of art, as Jane Austen did. I made sure to allow Mr. Darcy plenty of time likewise, so that he could carefully compose the following letter to Lady Catherine in The Darcys of Pemberley (as it says in the last chapter of Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth at length persuaded him to seek a reconciliation):

Darcys-of-Pemberley_KINDLEAllow me to offer my congratulations on the engagement of your daughter Anne… Much as you are looking forward to this addition to your family circle, Mrs. Darcy and I find that we are expecting an addition to ours by a different means. This blessing causes me to reflect on the importance of maintaining (and restoring when necessary) peace and unity within my extended family. I regret the disagreement that has broken that bond in our case.

Although I will make no apologies for a marriage in which I have been supremely happy, I am sorry that the accomplishment of it occasioned you pain. My hope is that the success of the match now made for your daughter will produce a degree of felicity eclipsing any pleasure lost by a disappointed former plan.

Though I am amenable to conciliation, what passed between us – especially uncharitable words spoken and written against my wife – cannot be easily forgotten. However, if after the passage of time you have experienced an alteration in your position to the extent that you now find yourself able to make some reparation, I am willing to hear whatever you have to say on the subject. The matter is entirely in your own hands, Madam…

What do you think? Will this letter budge the old buzzard? As Darcy asks Elizabeth, is it too harsh or too yielding? Has your own life been significantly impacted by some special piece of correspondence you have either sent or received?

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Minneapolis, Here I Come!

My Regency-style dress is finished and I have purchased my plane ticket. Tomorrow, I’ll be flying to Minneapolis to attend my first Jane Austen convention! It’s bigger than national; this one’s INTERnational. It’s the Annual General Meeting (AGM) of the Jane Austen Society of North America (JASNA), this year to be held in Minneapolis, Minnesota. I’ll be doing a little sightseeing on Thursday, but then I’ll plunge right into the full slate of activities on Friday.

The conference is sold out again this year, so there will be hundreds of Janeites running around the city (or at least the hotel) in period costume, taking tea, taking classes, and taking dance workshops. Doesn’t that sound like fun? You could learn how to crochet a reticule (small handbag) or how to play Whist (popular card game of the day). You could sit in on an explanation of property rights and inheritance, especially primogeniture and entailment, as seen in Austen’s novels. And, since this is the 200th anniversary of the publication of Pride and Prejudice, many of the speakers will be further elucidating attendees on that book in particular. Example: Do Elizabeth and Darcy Really Improve “upon acquaintance”? Then, the culmination of the festivities will be the banquet, promenade, and Netherfield Ball on Saturday night.

The possibilities are endless, and my head is swimming with everything there will be to see and do – too much to cram into a couple short days. But actually, more than the classes, I’m looking forward to the people I’ll meet. This will be my chance to finally talk face-to-face with many of my fellow members of the Austen Authors group, as well as making the acquaintance of other Austen-style authors and Jane Austen fans. Perhaps I’ll even meet a few of my own fans at the author book signing on Friday evening!

I promise you a full report after I return, with lots of pictures. Right now, though, I’d better run. I still have a lot of packing to do. Minneapolis, here I come!

“So much novelty and beauty! I have travelled so little that every fresh place would be interesting to me.” (Anne, Persuasion, chapter 20)

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Sale Celebrating Clean Books

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When I was invited to participate in the “Clean Authors $.99 Back-to-School eBook Sale” event, I thought, “What a great idea!” The intention is to collect a whole bunch of “clean” books (sans sex, swearing, and graphic violence) all together in one place and offer them at bargain prices. Readers can buy with confidence, getting some great deals and discovering new authors who write to their tastes. And for authors, it’s a chance to connect with a whole new range of potential readers. I signed on right away.

Clean. “That’s for me,” I thought. I never write anything I would be embarrassed to have my mother or my pastor’s wife read. The Darcys of Pemberley might be rated PG or PG-13 for several allusions to sex (Darcy and Elizabeth are married, after all!), but For Myself Alone and Return to Longbourn are positively chaste.

I’ve always felt like there’s a bit of a gap in the genre spectrum, and that I fall smack into it. My novels have strong romantic themes, yes, but I inwardly cringe if someone tries to label them “romance novels.” To me, that term means something else entirely; just take a look at the covers on most the books in that section. And what about Jane Austen, whom I pattern my writing style after? I can’t claim to be on her level, but would any educated person ever say she wrote romance novels? I don’t think so! She’s shelved in “literature.”

So where does that leave me? In a crack somewhere – not belonging in “romance” but not in “Christian fiction” either. And I’ve yet to walk into a book store (virtual or brick-and-mortar) and see a shelf labeled “clean fiction.” Maybe this event is as close as we come.

For-Myself-Alone_KINDLETastes vary, but if yours tends toward a “clean read,” I hope you’ll visit the official Clean Authors site for this one-day special event. I’m sure you’ll discover some great books at bargain prices. I’m featuring For Myself Alone and offering it at $.99 on Kindle for a limited time only! Here’s the direct link.

My only quibble with the event is a question of semantics – the use of the term “clean authors” itself, as if it’s the character of the person and not the content of the book being described. Perhaps it’s a minor point, but then I’m constantly striving for le mot juste (just the right word). Occupational hazard.

Catherine and Henry 2Such was Catherine Morland at ten. At fifteen, appearances were mending… Her love of dirt gave way to an inclination for finery, and she grew clean as she grew smart; she had now the pleasure of sometimes hearing her father and mother remark on her personal improvement. “Catherine grows quite a good-looking girl – she is almost pretty today,” were words which caught her ears now and then; and how welcome were the sounds! To look almost pretty is an acquisition of higher delight to a girl who has been looking plain the first fifteen years of her life than a beauty from her cradle can ever receive. (Northanger Abbey, chapter 1)

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When a Rose is More Than Just a Rose

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A friend of mine recently suggested that I should do a post on the language of flowers. It’s something I knew virtually nothing about, but, since I happen to love flowers of all kinds, the idea intrigued me. Plus, I figured it would give me a great chance to use some of the hundreds (or perhaps thousands) of floral pictures I’ve taken over the years!

The first step, though, was to establish a connection to Jane Austen. A Google search led me to a several listings connecting the two terms (Jane Austen & the language of flowers). Unfortunately, they all seemed to trace back to the same incomplete source, that being Wikipedia, which says (in part):

IMGP1386The language of flowers, sometimes called floriography, is a means of cryptological communication through the use or arrangement of flowers. Meaning has been attributed to flowers for thousands of years, and some form of floriography has been practiced in traditional cultures throughout Europe, Asia, and the Middle East…  Interest in floriography soared in Victorian England and in the United States during the 19th century. Gifts of blooms, plants, and specific floral arrangements were used to send a coded message to the recipient, allowing the sender to express feelings which could not be spoken aloud in Victorian society. Armed with floral dictionaries, Victorians often exchanged small “talking bouquets”, called nosegays or tussie-mussies, which could be worn or carried as a fashion accessory… (and, as to its use in literature)… William Shakespeare, Jane Austen, Charlotte and Emily Bronte, and children’s novelist Frances Hodgson Burnett, among others, used the language of flowers in their writings.NA book cover

That’s it – no elaboration on where or how Jane Austen supposedly used this cryptic language to convey hidden meaning. My own investigations (searching the entire data base of her writings for the word “flower”) led me to this promising passage in Northanger Abbey. It’s a conversation between Catherine Morland and Henry Tilney. She begins:

“I have just learnt to love a hyacinth.”

“And how might you learn? By accident or argument?”

“Your sister taught me; I cannot tell how. Mrs. Allen used to take pains, year after year, to make me like them; but I never could, till I saw them the other day in Milsom Street; I am naturally indifferent about flowers.”

IMGP1273“But now you love a hyacinth. So much the better. You have gained a new source of enjoyment, and it is well to have as many holds upon happiness as possible. Besides, a taste for flowers is always desirable in your sex, as a means of getting you out of doors, and tempting you to more frequent exercise than you would otherwise take. And though the love of a hyacinth may be rather domestic, who can tell, the sentiment once raised, but you may in time come to love a rose?”

“But I do not want any such pursuit to get me out of doors. The pleasure of walking and breathing fresh air is enough for me, and in fine weather I am out more than half my time. Mamma says I am never within.”

“At any rate, however, I am pleased that you have learnt to love a hyacinth. The mere habit of learning to love is the thing…”

Aha! To decipher this passage, I just needed to know what “hyacinth” and “rose” mean! Not so easy, as it turns out, because there are a wide variety of meanings ascribed to these two flowers, according to whose list you use and what color the flower (which we aren’t told in the quote above).

hyacinthFor hyacinth, I found these diverse meanings; jealousy (yellow), loveliness/prayerfulness (white), playfulness (red or pink), constancy (blue), and “I am sorry”/”please forgive me” (purple). So which did Jane Austen have in mind? My money’s on the last one, not only because purple is a very common color for hyacinths but because of what happens later in the story. Perhaps this mention foreshadows how Catherine will soon be sorry indeed for suspecting Henry’s father (General Tilney) of doing away with his wife. Her ultimate repentance of the bad habit of letting her wild imagination rule her represents an important step in Catherine’s character development – a step away from adolescence and toward mature womanhood.

red roseI found more meanings listed for rose than any other flower. Apparently, it is more capable of conveying specific messages than the rest, the subtleties depending on not only the color in this case, but also the number of blooms, their type, and condition. For instance, a bouquet of mature blooms conveys gratitude. A white rose or a bud of any color seems to represent innocence, purity, or maidenhood. Along the same lines, a dried white rose says that death is preferable to loss of virtue! Dark crimson is appropriate for mourning. Yellow means jealousy again. A thornless rose speaks of love at first sight. And if you give someone the leaf only, it means, “You may hope.”

Catherine and Henry 2This is certainly not an exhaustive list of what can be conveyed by the most communicative of flowers. But the generally favored meaning seems to be one of romantic, even passionate, love (especially if the rose is red). This shouldn’t surprise anyone. And it’s no doubt what Henry Tilney has in mind when he tells Catherine that he is hopeful that she will move beyond caring about hyacinths to preferring a rose. He’s ready for love, but he knows Catherine isn’t quite there yet. She still has some things to learn first.

I find it interesting that Mrs. Allen could never get Catherine to care about flowers at all. And yet now, after meeting Mr. Tilney and his sister, she’s suddenly interested in learning to love them. She has experienced an awakening; she’s now open to new possibilities. And then Henry sums up the important point for us, saying “The mere habit of learning to love is the thing…”

IMGP2554Now, with all this in mind, look at the passage from Northanger Abbey again. Is there any validity to my analysis? It’s entirely possible I’ve read more into it than Jane Austen ever intended. What do you think? Are there hidden meanings here, or is a rose just a rose?

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Elizabeth was in no condition to ride. Instead she took the opportunity to stroll through the gardens close to the house, choosing the formal knot garden as her destination. She began her tour with the roses round the perimeter, casting about for the best blooms and drinking in their sweet scent. The flowering of the Gallica and Damask roses had long gone by, but the Chinas carried on despite the heat of late summer. (The Darcys of Pemberley)

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PS – A Twitter friend just shared this related link with me. It’s a fanfiction piece depicting the Darcy/Elizabeth proposal scene from P&P, “spoken” exclusively in the language of flowers! Hilarious. I can just feel the tension in the room as the two of them thrust flowers back and forth at each other to express what they are feeling. Take a look.

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WIP: “My Darling Exile”

work in progressI apologize for being so late with this post. In saying this, I presuppose that you’ve grown accustomed to receiving from me something fascinating to read approximately once a week, and that you’ve been feeling rather faint for the lack of it these past several days.  But I want you to know that I have perfectly good reasons why I haven’t had time to work on my blog lately:

1) Life got in the way. This category includes various family obligations and a collection of routine medical/dental/optometric appointments. 2) Special events. Among other things, I had a 3-day art show/book signing earlier this month; my class reunion this past Saturday (never mind which one!); and some preparations for traveling to the JASNA Annual General Meeting in a few weeks (so excited for that!). But most importantly, I’ve been putting in some serious time on 3) Writing the new book!

The idea for this, my current WIP (work-in-progress), occurred to me over two years ago, quickly followed by the title. I had used “Darling Exiles” to head a blog post I wrote on an unrelated topic – the concept that, if you’re a writer, you must be prepared to “kill your darlings.” In this case, I had decided to merely cast mine into exile instead. Anyway, I really liked the sound of it (Darling Exiles) and I realized it actually fit what the new book would be about.

I couldn’t really begin working on it at the time, though. I had other projects to finish first. the writing processAnd then I ended up writing another entire novel, Return to Longbourn, ahead of it. But I decided to dash off a prologue to help me capture the idea (see Germ of a Novel). Then I wrote another prologue… and another. (I have a little problem in that area. See post To Prologue or Not to Prologue). After that, I set the book aside for more than a year, only turning it over in my mind from time to time. Finally, with the basic plot settled into place and some necessary research done, I’ve now begun to write in earnest.

Persuasion - book coverI’m not going to reveal how the term “exile” works into the story (or who the exile is!), but I will say this much about the book. It’s a Persuasion tie-in with Jane Austen herself as narrator and heroine. The full working title is My Darling Exile: A Novel, wherein Jane Austen relates her own story of Persuasion.  It will unveil the truth about a previously secret romance she had with a sea-captain of her own, paralleling her novel. Persuasion is my second favorite Jane Austen (after P&P, of course), and I’m having a delightful time weaving the two stories together.

She had given him up to oblige others. It had been the effect of over-persuasion. It had been weakness and timidity. He had been most warmly attached to her, and had never seen a woman since whom he thought her equal; but, except from some natural sensation of curiosity, he had no desire of meeting her again. (Persuasion, chapter 7)

persuasion - kissI have only finished five chapters (about 12,000 words) so far. Long ways to go. When will it be finished? That’s difficult to say. Hopefully no more than six months from now, but it all depends on how much of “reasons for delay” number (1 and (2 arise. If I’m late with blog posts to come, I hope it’s because of reason (3 instead.

Wish me luck and lots of uninterrupted writing time!

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Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000037_00034]Update, August 2014: Well, it took nearly another year, but the book is finally finished and published as The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen. Although I was sad to give up the original title, the new one will give readers a much quicker impression of what this novel is about. I did manage to retain “my darling exile” as a repeated line in the book, however!

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Tea and Bonnets

bonnets - jane and elizabethSince I had just recently made my first attempt at producing a Regency style hat, I thought it would be fun to do a post about hats and bonnet making. But fellow Austen Author C. Allyn Pierson sort of beat me to it. No, actually, she’s done a far more thorough job of it than I had ever intended. She’s even provided us with step-by-step instructions for how you can make your own. So I urge you to visit her post here on the Austen Authors’ site.

That being said, I still intend to share my own millinery efforts with you.

“Look here, I have bought this bonnet. I do not think it is very pretty; but I thought I might as well buy it as not. I shall pull it to pieces as soon as I get home, and see if I can make it up any better.” (Lydia Bennet, Pride and Prejudice)

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I had been invited to a Jane Austen garden tea party given by Laurel Ann Nattress (proprietoress of the Austenprose blog), and clearly some kind of hat or bonnet was required. I had none. So, like Lydia, I bought a less-than-stunning hat with the idea of making something better of it. A trip to the craft store came next (always fun to have an excuse to prowl around Joanne’s for an hour or so), where I collected a basket full of silk flowers, ribbons, beads and feathers – more than I could possibly use.

The Excellent Company

The Excellent Company

At home, I set about my creative work, testing out different combinations and arrangements for the trimmings, and then securing things into place with thread and glue. I was quite pleased with the results and not a little disappointed that I didn’t win the prize for best bonnet at the tea! However, that was the only minor blight on an otherwise perfect afternoon.

As I went in search of an appropriate Jane Austen quote to use for this post, the one above came immediately to mind. But there were so many others – more in her letters to Cassandra than in her books – that I couldn’t limit myself to just one this time. Here’s a sampling with a few of my favorite hat-related phrases highlighted:

“I am glad I bought my bonnet, if it is only for the fun of having another bandbox! (Lydia, P&P)

Mrs. Elton, in all her apparatus of happiness, her large bonnet and her basket, was very ready to lead the way…  (Emma)

“Do you know, I saw the prettiest hat you can imagine, in a shop window in Milsom Street just now – very like yours, only with coquelicot ribbons instead of green; I quite longed for it.” (Isabella Thorpe, Northanger Abbey)

“Ah, Mother! How do you do?…Where did you get that quiz of a hat? It makes you look like an old witch.” (John Thorpe, Northanger Abbey)

My Masterpiece

My Masterpiece

I bought some Japan ink likewise, and next week shall begin my operations on my hat, on which you know my principal hopes of happiness depend. (letter, 1798)

Flowers are very much worn, and fruit is still more the thing. Elizabeth has a bunch of strawberries, and I have seen grapes, cherries, plums, and apricots. There are likewise almonds, and raisins, French plums, and tamarinds at the grocers’, but I have never seen any of them in hats. (letter, 1799)

Elizabeth has given me a hat, and it is not only a pretty hat, but a pretty style of hat too. It is something like Eliza’s, only, instead of being all straw, half of it is narrow purple ribbon. I flatter myself, however, that you can understand very little of it from this description. Heaven for bid that I should ever offer such encouragement to explanations as to give a clear one on any occasion myself! (letter, 1799)

My mother has ordered a new bonnet, and so have I; both white strip, trimmed with white ribbon. I find my straw bonnet looking very much like other people’s, and quite as smart. Bonnets of cambric muslin on the plan of Lady Bridges’ are a good deal worn, and some of them are very pretty; but I shall defer one of that sort till your arrival. (letter, 1801)

We met not a creature at Mrs. Lillingstone’s and yet were not so very stupid, as I expected, which I attribute to my wearing my new bonnet and being in good looks. (letter, 1801)

[Mary’s] approbation of her child’s hat makes me very happy. Mrs. J. A. bought one at Gayleard’s for Caroline, of the same shape, but brown and with a feather. (letter, 1808)

Miss Burton has made me a very pretty little bonnet, and now nothing can satisfy me but I must have a straw hat, of the riding-hat shape, like Mrs. Tilson’s; and a young woman in this neighbourhood is actually making me one. I am really very shocking, but it will not be dear at a Guinea. (letter, 1811)

Author Shannon Winslow, "slave to fashion", signing books at JA tea.

Author Shannon Winslow, “slave to fashion”, signing books at JA tea.

As you see, Jane Austen was not so cerebral that she was immune to the allure of fashion. Hmmm. Immune to the allure of fashion. Those words sounded so familiar when I typed them just now. Oh, that’s right. This was not a new thought… or even my thought. It belongs to Josephine Walker, heroine of my second novel For Myself Alone. I’ll leave you with a quote from her. Does she speak for you as well?

“Although I daresay I am far less consumed with style and finery than most young ladies, I am not completely immune to their allure. Just as any other female, be she eighteen or eighty, I would rather be smartly dressed than not.”

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My Studio: One Messy Little Secret

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When I started writing ten years ago, I didn’t understand that by doing so I would be giving up some of my personal privacy. It’s not that I’ve become so famous that I can’t leave my house without being stalked by paparazzi – hardly the case. It’s that, as an author, I can’t help but put more of myself into my characters and stories than I’m consciously aware of or intend. This truth came home to me when, after reading my first novel (The Darcys of Pembereley) my mother-in-law (who had known me for over 30 years) remarked, “I learned a lot about you by reading your book.” Hmm.

I must admit that what she said made me a little uneasy. What had I written that was so revealing? Was she, rightly or wrongly, assuming some of Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship closely reflected my own marriage to her son? Awkward.

Since that time, though, I’ve reconciled myself to the fact that my life is an open book (bad pun intended). And because there’s no point in trying to keep secrets any longer, I might as well confess to you what my mother-in-law has known from the beginning. I am a terrible housekeeper. It’s true. In my heart, I desire and appreciate orderliness, but in real life, I rarely achieve it. Oh, sure, I manage to get the dishes washed, keep up with the laundry, and avoid any major health code violations. It’s the ubiquitous clutter; that’s my major downfall.

IMGP2635My sewing/craft/art/writing studio is the prime example (see certifiably unstaged, unretouched photos).

This used to be my oldest son’s bedroom, which I staked claim to the minute he moved out. Although it’s supposed to be available as a guest room (technically there is a futon somewhere underneath the debris), in actuality, this one little room is ALL MINE. Not too much to ask, is it? – especially considering that my husband has a gigantic shop for all his manly hobbies and big boy toys!

IMGP2631So this is my work/play room, which has to accommodate (and house supplies for) all my various artsy-crafty activities. I’ve been sewing since I was a kid (thus a sewing machine, serger, fabric stash, thread array, trims, and accessories). As an adult, I started making and selling beaded jewelry (stash of beads, tools, display case, etc). Later, I followed in my mother’s footsteps and began painting seriously (paper, canvases, collage materials, various kinds of paint, brushes, framing supplies, and finished artwork). Then there were my more minor forays into the world of crochet, stamping, and stained glass work (more assorted supplies). And, of course, each of these interests has its accompanying collection of books and reference materials. Plus I keep gift boxes and wrapping paper in this room.

That’s quite a list. No wonder my all-purpose studio is bursting at the seams! I probably should get rid of some of this stuff, since it all has to take a back seat to my writing these days. But then again, you never know when you’re going to need a glue gun, a scrap of gold ribbon, or a peacock feather. I used all three a couple of days ago, as a matter of fact, trimming a new bonnet!

“I have bought this bonnet. I do not think it is very pretty; but I thought I might as well buy it as not. I shall pull it to pieces as soon as I get home, and see if I can make it up any better… There were two or three much uglier in the shop; and when I have bought some prettier-coloured satin to trim it with fresh, I think it will be very tolerable.” (Lydia, Pride and Prejudice, chapter 39)

IMGP2633This space (at right) – my carefully laid out writing desk – is the heart of the operation. You’ll see that my old dependable (and sometimes excruciatingly slow) laptop computer is front and center, propped up on a 2×2″ board to improve the angle. It is flanked by my indispensable Encarta Webster’s Dictionary, Second Edition, on the left and my trusty thesaurus on the right (conveniently tucked into the drawer along with a tray of sewing thread). I also keep some JA and Regency reference books as well as important creature comforts (phone, glass of water, Kleenex, selection of chewing gum so that I won’t snack, dental floss in case I fail at previous resolution) within easy reach.

2009-01-19 007The goal is that when I sit down at my desk, I’ll have everything I need to be most productive. It must be working, since I’ve managed to write four novels here so far. When my head is into the story, I forget all about the clutter. And if I need inspiration, I can always look out my window, where the view is much more tranquil.

jane austen's writing deskAs for the clutter itself, I am fond of saying, “creative spaces are messy places.” That explanation might pass with the non-artistic sort, those who have no better authority to go by. I worry, however, that some of my fellow creative types will say it isn’t so. I know many who are in my camp, but there are probably others who have spotless homes and clutter-free work spaces. And what about Jane Austen? Well, she had no room at all for clutter on her tiny writing table!

 So where does that leave me? Now that you know my dirty little secret, what’s your verdict? Can you relate to my affliction, or are you a perpetual neatnick? Any suggestions for how to rescue me from the shameful curse of clutter? Should I even try? What do you think?

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The Author’s Autograph

JA's signatureDuring her lifetime, Jane Austen attempted to hide her identity as the author of Sense and Sensibility, Pride and Prejudice, etc., writing anonymously as “A Lady.” Her reasons? She reportedly shuddered at the idea of notoriety, plus writing novels for pay wasn’t considered entirely suitable. For the most part, then, she got her wish, keeping her anonymity. But I think it’s a shame in at least one respect, and that is that she never had the thrill of signing her published works for fans.

“You need not send them word at Longbourn of my going, if you do not like it, for it will make the surprise the greater when I write to them and sign my name ‘Lydia Wickham.’ What a good joke it will be! I can hardly write for laughing.” (Pride and Prejudice, chapter 47)book signing

When I knew I would soon have my first book (The Darcys of Pemberley) published, that’s one of the things I really looked forward to – author book signings! I pictured myself sitting behind a table at a bookstore or library with (hopefully) a long line of people wanting to have me autograph their copies of the new book.

Although I knew very well that authors were just regular people (after all, I was now one of them!), there is a certain mystique to it. And “an author’s signature increases the value of books for collectors,” says Wikipedia. Whether that applies to my books, remains to be seen. One enterprising soul is putting the theory to the test, I noticed, listing a used but author-signed copy of TDOP on Amazon as a “collector’s edition” for more than twice the price of a new one!

IMGP2627Anyway, I worked on my autograph prior to the release date, filling entire sheets of paper front and back as I practiced to develop an ease and consistency, and to add a little artistic flare to it. So I was ready for the fun to begin when the book came out!

I have done library presentations, book fairs, and personal appearances of other kinds, signing dozens of books and enjoying every minute of it! (I’m sure it’s been more of a thrill for me to meet fans than it has been for them to meet me.) Of course, I won’t have the chance to see most of the people who buy my books. And, ironically, the majority of copies are now purchased in e-book format – very difficult to sign.

IMGP2622To make up for it, I have produced hand-signed peel-and-stick bookplates, which I’m now offering free of charge as a thankyou for purchasing. Just contact me (see contact info) and tell me how many you’d like. Put them in your paperbacks or wherever you like. Who knows? Someday they may be worth a pretty penny! 😀

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Owning the Estate

NetherfieldI’ve got a chance for you to show off your Jane Austen knowledge – a quiz about the estates that figure prominently in her novels! But first a few bits of news.

Audiobook Update: Production is now finished on Return to Longbourn, and it should go live before the end of the month!  The Darcys of Pemberley and Mr. Collins’s Last Supper are now “Whispersynced” to their Kindle editions. This means you can switch back and forth between audio and Kindle without losing your place. Or try “immersion” reading – listen to the audio while following along on your Kindle. Even if you’re not interested in getting the audio versions, I hope you’ll go and listen to the free samples, just for fun. I’m so proud of my narrators, Marian Hussey and Chandler Craig, who do a mean Mrs. Bennet and Mr. Collins respectively!

New Excerpt:  It was my turn this past week to put up and “Exquisite Excerpt” at Austen Authors. I decided to use a never-before-seen passage from Return to Longbourn, one featuring the volatile relationship between Mary Bennet and her stormy-tempered employer, Mr. Farnsworth. Watch out for flying sparks! Read it here.

Magazine Review: A gratifying endorsement in the current issue of Jane Austen’s Regency World Magazine

IMGP2623Shannon Winslow continues to add to her “stash of unpublished Jane Austen novels” with this picturesque tale of a young woman who comes into an unexpected fortune. Set in familiar Jane Austen territory – Hampshire and Bath – For Myself Alone follows Josephine Walker,a rather charming heroine, on her journey to self-knowledge and true love. Winslow is attracting quite a following, and this book will please her growing army of fans.

Now for the JA quiz I promised you! The source of this fun exercise is Sporcle.com, and I invite you to go there and give the official version a try. If you would prefer an untimed, totally unofficial, multiple-choice version, however, I’ve set that up for you below. Personally, I LOVE multiple-choice, and I’ve always suspected I could pass that kind of test on a subject I knew almost nothing about. So you should breeze through this. Then be sure to pat yourself on the back for how smart you are!

Match the estate name with the proprietors. You can find the answers below the quote, but NO peeking!

  1. General Tilney                                         A.   Mansfield Park
  2. Fitwilliam Darcy                                      B.   Barton Park
  3. Emma Woodhouse                                  C.   Netherfield
  4. The Dashwood Family                            D.   Delaford
  5. Sir Walter Elliot                                       E.   Rosings Park
  6. The Bennet Family                                 F.   Pemberley
  7. Mr. George Knightley                            G.   Northanger Abbey    
  8. Colonel Brandon                                     H.   Longbourn
  9. Mr. Charles Bingley                                I.   Kellynch
  10. Sir Thomas Bertram                              J.   Hartfield
  11. Sir John Middleton                                K.   Donwell Abbey
  12. Lady Catherine de Bourgh                    L.   Norland

Their estate was large, and their residence was… in the centre of the property, where, for many generations, they had lived in so respectable a manner as to engage the general good opinion of their surrounding acquaintance. (Sense and Sensibility, chapter 1)

(Quiz answers: 1G, 2F, 3J, 4L, 5I, 6H, 7K, 8D, 9C, 10A, 11B, 12E)

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A Pleasure Shared

fanfareFanfare please! I have an exciting announcement: The Darcys of Pemberley and Mr. Collins’s Last Supper are now available in AUDIO!  (Return to Longbourn will be coming next month.) If you have an account at Audible.com, or decide to open one, I hope you’ll do me the honor of making one of my books your first/next purchase. At the very least, listen to the samples (follow links above). My wonderful narrators – Marian Hussey (TDOP) and Chandler Craig (Mr.C) – do a mean Mrs. Bennet and Mr. Collins!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
The process began a couple of months ago (see previous post Books Read Aloud), and now our work has born fruit: my first audio books! I say “our work” because it truly was a collaborative effort. Obviously, I was responsible for writing the books in the first place. Marian and Chandler used their expertise to translate the books into audio form. Then I had the thrill of being the first to listen to the recordings, offering corrections and suggesting improvements, which the narrators efficiently attended to before uploading the completed books. Oh, and the cover art had to be modified – accomplished by my favorite graphic artist Micah Hansen!
 
So, as you see, there were several people and lots of time/effort involved. I’m delighted with the finished products, and I hope the books will be enjoyed by audio readers for years to come! The creative process is never complete until the work is shared.
 
Fanny Price - Frances OShe became a subscriber… amazed at her own doings in every way, to be a renter, a chuser of books! And to be having any one’s improvement in view in her choice! But so it was. Susan had read nothing, and Fanny longed to give her a share in her own first pleasures, and inspire a taste for the biography and poetry which she delighted in herself.  (Mansfield Park, chapter 40)
 
That’s really what it’s all about for authors like me – finding ways to share the stories we love with other people. (See related post: Making Connections) And hearing back from satisfied readers absolutely makes my day! It keeps me going. Case in point, I recently got this letter from a woman who had received two of my books as a gift from a friend:
 
I must admit, I have not taken the time for quite a while to sit down to a good read. When I received the gift, I was intrigued to the point of beginning “The Darcys of Pemberley” immediately. “Pride and Prejudice” has long been a tremendous favorite of mine, and I was anxious to see what a contemporary author could do with a sequel to the novel. I WAS NOT  disappointed!
 
You did an exceptional job of captivating my attention so well I just could not put that book down! Each time I sat to read I’d tell myself I could only afford one chapter before getting to items I needed to complete about my house. Unfortunately for me, I usually read two or three chapters before I forced myself to abandon the book for more pressing business.
 
Thank you for a job well done indeed. I loved every moment I spent reading and have completed the first book. Now on to the second! I can’t wait to begin “Return to Longbourn” to see what else Lydia can find to embarrass herself, or what Kitty can find to bring attention to her inexperience and selfishness. This was a wonderful treat for me and I wanted to share with you my pleasure in enjoying the books. Thank you so very much! 
 
Wentworth's letter_SodabugI share this letter with you not to toot my own horn. I really mean to brag on this delightful lady and what a grand thing she did for me by taking a few minutes out of her day to send me this thoughtful note. I’m going to pin it to my wall to inspire me to similar acts of kindness. Regardless what line of work we’re in, once in a while we all need the encouragement of hearing, “Thank you for a job well done!” Don’t you agree?
 
Have you been on the giving or the receiving end of a special word of encouragement recently? Please share your story/comment. 
 
 
 
 
 
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