Me, Myself, and I

20150427_155238Yay! I just finished my most recent book, which will probably be titled Miss Georgiana Darcy of Pemberley – a companion novel to The Darcys of Pemberley, this time written from Georgiana’s perspective. (Learn more about it in Work-in-Progress). There will of course be rewrites, editing, proofreading, cover design, and formatting before it’s published, but it feels good to have the story itself completed.

Since the whole point of this book was to give Georgiana’s view of events, I decided to write the book in first person, as if she were telling you the story herself. So there’s a whole lot of “me, myself, and I” in it.

Writing novels in first person seems to come into and go out of fashion periodically. It was pretty much unheard of in Jane Austen’s day as far as I know, and her six novels are all written in third person omniscient point-of-view. So that’s what I used for my two P&P sequels (The Darcys of Pemberley, Return to Longbourn). But I tried the first person approach in For Myself Alone and I discovered I enjoyed it. Since then, I used it in The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen as well as this latest book.

So what’s the advantage of writing/reading in first person? I think it allows you to feel closer to the hero/heroine because you’re basically living inside that character’s head throughout the entire story. You see what s/he sees, hear what s/he hears. You are privy to all his/her thoughts, internal debates, and emotions. Whatever s/he knows, you know.

The disadvantages are the flip side of the advantages I just mentioned. Because you are inside the heroine’s head, you can ONLY see what she sees, hear what she hears, experience what she experience, and nothing else. If something important happens elsewhere, you (the reader) don’t get to know about it unless/until the heroine of the book finds out. (Some writers get around this limitation by switching back and forth between two or more point-of-view characters, but that can be tricky too.)

It seems to me, though, that this is the most realistic way to present a story. Think about it. Every one of us experiences life in “first person.” We have no choice. We know only what we know. We’re clueless about what’s going on in somebody else’s head unless they choose to tell us, and even then the chance for miscommunication (or deliberate deception) is high. We have to stumble through life with incomplete information, often basing our actions on the way our minds fill in the blanks – what we’re guessing motivated another’s actions, what we assume someone meant by what they said, etc.

No wonder there are so many misunderstandings! Makes things tough in real life, but of such is good conflict in fiction made. Look at Darcy and Elizabeth:

D & E, back turned“There is, I believe, in every disposition a tendency to some particular evil – a natural defect, which not even the best education can overcome.”

“And your defect is to hate everybody.”

“And yours,” he replied with a smile, “is willfully to misunderstand them.” (Pride and Prejudice)

Their misunderstandings keep us going for nearly the full length of the novel. Why? Because Elizabeth can’t see inside Darcy’s head to know why he behaves as he does, says what he says. Good thing she’s kept in the dark too, or there would be no story.

As a reader, do you have a preference – first-person versus third-person stories? Why?

About Shannon Winslow

author of historical fiction in the tradition of Jane Austen
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4 Responses to Me, Myself, and I

  1. Sheila L. M. says:

    I don’t have a preference as to POV. I have to judge each story on how well the elements flow in telling the tale. I am looking forward to this book. i didn’t see any projection on the publication date. Did I miss that?

  2. rearadmiral says:

    Definitely looking forward to this! 🙂 I just enjoyed Abigail Bok’s “An Obstinate, Headstrong Girl”, but it was missing one little thing…. Georgiana Darcy!!! Lol, I whined in my review…and to the author…how sad I was that Georgiana Darcy didn’t make an appearance. I stated on some thread that one of the best things about “Death Comes to Pemberley” miniseries was Eleanor Tomlinson’s Georgiana Darcy. I don’t have a POV preference but I do enjoy first-person quite a lot. I don’t need to see the “whole world” of novel….if I like and care about the heroine(or hero), I want to be fully in their “world” and by their side.

    • Thanks for your comment! I like what you say about being “fully in their world.” That’s what I was writing this book – fully in Georgiana’s world. I enjoy that kind of immersion. It really helps me get to know the character, which is Georgiana’s case wasn’t easy! (See previous post: The Enigmatic Miss Darcy)

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